THE LIZ

you hear it first here the walking dead fan club forum ,clayton will be adding video coming  soon enjoy. part 2 is in the works:Dhttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jFAfc_voB00

THIS IS MY CHRONICALS

THIS ISNT LOGICAL IM IN HOSPITAL

FULL OF OBSTACLES/ FEELING LOST AND COLD

SEEMS LIKE I LOST MY HOLD

ON REALITY/WHERES THE SANITY/DEAD BODIES EVERYWHERE

THIS IS A TRAGEDY/AND THEY COMING OUT TO EAT/THERES A BLUR THROUGH

THE STREETS/GRAB A 2 BY 4 AND START RIPPING THIS LIKE A EMCEE ON BEAT

HERES MY SURVIVAL/ CALLING UP 5.0/ ALL IM GETTING IS DIAL TONE/

KILLER INSTINCT ACTIVITED CODE NAME TRIBAL/JUST RAN INTO MORGAN

SCARED HOLDING HIS BIBLE/

DIRECTIONS/TO AVOID THE INFECTION POINTED ME TO THE NEAREST

INTERSECTION/AM I IN INCEPTION OR JUST A REFLECTION OF A OUTBREAK

CONNECTION/IM LOCKED AND LOADED STRAPPED WITHSMITH AND WESON

SPOTTED A ARMORED TANK/POSTED UP BY A BANK/GROUP OF

WALKERS FEEDING/ WHILE IM FEELING HYPED UP ON CRANK

BOUT TO PERFORM CALL OF DUTY STYLE FLANK/

2 HEADSHOTS 1 RED DOT/STAIRS IS MY NEXT STOP/TRYING GET TO THE ROOFTOP/

ALL OF THIS IS HARD 2 EXPLAIN WHILE AM BREAKING THE CHAIN/

RUNNING INTO MURL HANCUFFED AND SHOUTING IN PAIN/

BLOOD LEAKING IN DRAINS/SEVERED A VANE ZOMBIE SENSES GOING INSANE

HANDED HIM A SAW B4 RUNNING AWAY/

FEELING PRESSURE IN MY LUNGS FULL CLIP IN MY GUN

THIS JUST THE BEGGINING YOUR NOT EVEN DONE/

/ THIS IS MY CHRONICAL FINISHED PT 1

This is a slight improvement on your first rap video.   You mixed your music with your voice (it's not just playing in the background this time).  That's much better.  Didn't you mention Merele on the roof with the handcuffs in your first video?  What falls short for me is the video itself.  This isn't anything against you personally, but all I'm looking at is a picture of (you?).  Is this video about you or the walking dead?  Perhaps put a picture of the walking dead logo rather than a picture of you?  Or, try your video editing skills by using clips from the TV show itself.

This seems to be about Season 1 Episode 1 for the most part.  So you're about two years behind.  But we gotta start somewhere.  I can appreciate the talent behind making rap.  I couldn't do it.

This is still about the same though.  Your first video was about a 4.5 - 5/10 for me.  This video is about 5.5 - 6/10.  The lyrical content is good.  Glad you didn't swear/use profanity.  The back ground music is alright.  But the video aspect isn't very good (just staring at a picture the whole time is very boring). 

And using caps lock for all your text is also very annoying.

lol, My girlfriend used to type in caps lock it took 2 years for her to break the habbit. I like the lyrics in this one pretty good, I give it a solid 8 looking forward to a video to go with these lyrics. 

to me it was alright

I really dont like much rap/hip hop or dance music... but is good to know   this iniciatives wher fans make music based in TWD... question... there any hard rock/heavy metal band who have actually made any songs based on TWD?????

nina this is just the music side tom clayton is working on the video as we speak this is not the finished product just gave this forum a sneak peek at it .....but thx for the feed back full video will be up soon and yes the part about merl is there still plus part2 will be ending season 1 it starts in the beggining because its my chronicles and how im intertwine with the cast part 2 is really cool as well will record once part 1 video is complete which im exicited to see....

thx seikone video will be up soon to watch the completed version...:D

thx niupon maybe you will like the next part when it comes out:D

stop double/triple posting.  Just press EDIT on the bottom right of your post to add more.

Posts merged.

Looking forward to the final product.